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March 15
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To the girl I saw
With the sad, sad eyes.
To the boy I met
Who wasn't allowed to cry.
To the man I saw
Who was falsely accused.
To the woman I met
Who was badly abused.

This is my ode to you
For you live on despite it.
I'm so proud of you
For you can still fight it.
The world is against you,
But it's not your fault.
It's just the way 
This world was taught.

So live on, live on,
Don't you give up here.
It gets better later,
The light is near.
I believe in you,
I know you can make it.
I'll reach out my hand,
If you need it, just take it.

You're special, 
You're important,
You're not invisible,
You exist, 
And you'll be fine.
Just a poem to all of those who have come so far despite the hurt.
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Elias-Hale Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, thank you for this! I'd say something about "things like this" keeping me going, but I can't really say I've ever seen anything quite like this... This is amazing. Great work, very encouraging to someone who's struggling. 
kiwiootori Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014  Student Writer
You're welcome! I'm glad you liked it! I aim to help people who are struggling and I'm glad you feel like my poem accomplished it.
The-Dream-Book Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing!
kiwiootori Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you!
KatanaOngaku Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
oh wow that hit right where it matters:sighs: :flyinglove Llama Emoji-15 (Sniff) [V1] 
kiwiootori Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Student Writer
Ryuuko Ryuushi Mifune (Moe and feeling love) [V1] 
KatanaOngaku Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Tackling hug 
BadxRain Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Gah I love this
kiwiootori Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Student Writer
chikitooo Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
This is beautiful :icondragonwant:
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