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She sits at her desk
Her headphones in,
The world shut out.

She bleeds for others
As words fly from 
Her mind to her fingertips.

She stares at the screen,
At every little comment,
The good and the painful.

She forms her emotions
Into books and poems
To throw away the hurt.

She's a writer,
And her best weapons
Are her mind and her pen.
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:iconmezzoak1876:
Mezzoak1876 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2015  Hobbyist
I do this,I draw,write, and everyone says it beautiful, but I feel like a complete idiot and worthless and my piece sucks. I shut people out. Why not? Everyone. Shuts me out.
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waterwaytm Featured By Owner Edited Mar 5, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Totally me. This is exactly how I do it and feel.
This is my life in a nutshell.
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fableweaver55 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Hello Kaylie! Your work has been featured here: fableweaver55.deviantart.com/j…
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:iconkiwiootori:
kiwiootori Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015  Student Writer
Thank you sweetie~
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:iconfableweaver55:
fableweaver55 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
No problem! Your writing is amazing Love 
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:iconuntamedrayne:
UntamedRayne Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I know how this feels. My words are my weapons, my only outlet. I can't let the madness in my head out physically or verbally so I put on my headphones on and let my words spill out onto the page.
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:iconjbone007:
jbone007 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2015
Very well written. 
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:iconemeraldwillow9867:
Emeraldwillow9867 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Are you sure you don't, like stalk me or something?  This really sounds like me.
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:icondaedalusdavinci:
DaedalusDaVinci Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Perfection. :D
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:iconalyx-musicalnovice:
Alyx-MusicalNovice Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it! You're writing is great! ^^
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:iconwatchmebeme:
WatchMeBeMe Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Good imagery. Well done
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:iconangelsnowywolf8:
Angelsnowywolf8 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2014  Student Writer
This is very good. *smiles*
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:iconunintentionalboobage:
UnintentionalBoobage Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I wish I could write like you!
You're really good at it...
And by good I mean this is the most flipping fan-flipping-tastic and beautiful and amazing thing I have ever seen.
-Apart from all the characters I fangirl over, but y'know, that's to expected-
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:iconkiwiootori:
kiwiootori Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014  Student Writer
Haha thank you so much!
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:iconbraibrai7:
BraiBrai7 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Student Artist
i love you sise
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BraiBrai7 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Student Artist
i love it
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QQI25 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I know this is late, because you posted it in March, but this is awesome! I love it and can so relate to it. This is amazing!
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:iconrepressedthoughts:
RepressedThoughts Featured By Owner Edited Aug 14, 2014  Professional Writer
This was submitted in my birthday, and I don't think I ever read something more beautiful. Congrats!!
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:iconkittenroseabby:
kittenroseabby Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
wow. Happy cry (Tears of joy) (amazed)
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:iconfirefriesian:
FireFriesian Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This. Is. Me!
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:iconfallenforanangel:
FallenForAnAngel Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. So relatable and so powerful. I think you just summed up every young Writer and Author, Everywhere.
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:iconshadowkat678:
Shadowkat678 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So relatable! Nice job!
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Wiccaness07 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014
This is me in a nutshell :happybounce: 

I love it so much!
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Ask---Owlflight Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I read this to my mom and little brothers and everyone screamed "THATS YOU!!!!!! YOU SHUT THE WORLD OUT AND DEFINE THE WORLD IN ONE SMALL POEM!!!" Their exact words.
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:iconkiwiootori:
kiwiootori Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Student Writer
Well, I'm happy you could relate!
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Ask---Owlflight Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD thanks
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Kitsune0Jester Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Absolutely defines me.
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GMD-girl93 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014
This is me, so much...Is it alright if I write this down so I can keep it on me?...I'm not the most confident in alot of things..but my writing is one thing I know I can do...And this will really give me a boost...
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:iconkiwiootori:
kiwiootori Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Student Writer
I don't mind at all! If it helps you be more confident, go for it. I'm not very confident either, but I find that when you put your things out there, it makes you feel better. It makes me want to write more when people comment or favorite or say nice things, and no matter who you are, there's someone else out there just like you who likes the same things you do or feels the same way about different matters. And they'll like your work. So keep writing, and I'm so glad my writing could help you! Tackling hug 
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GMD-girl93 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014
Definetly~ Thanks so much! I will definetly remember this poem, when I need it..You are great!
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kiwiootori Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you very much! Blush 
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TheLittleWaterDragon Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I tip my hat to you, for this poem defines me in so many ways
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wordmeister Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Mind, pen, and the gift of imagination
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LadyOfFrost Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
 :happybounce: This is perfect. w00t! 
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Raptorwolf-AML Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOVE THIS!
Heck, this could apply for artists too
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:iconkiwiootori:
kiwiootori Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Student Writer
That's what I've been told! Thank you for your kind words!
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Raptorwolf-AML Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome!
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:iconarhodiana:
Arhodiana Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is my life.
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BrandiArthtic Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I LOVE this poem!
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aiftw Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
The typography of your poems are very similar to mine, in general. I like that.

Very accurately put down—kudos to you!
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Umbreon0 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is pretty accurate ^_^
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bassmegapokemonlover Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Professional Artist
The best description of a writer if I've ever heard, good work...=}
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:iconcarolgregoire:
carolgregoire Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Especially love the second verse. So true!
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djred9999 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beyond true.
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Chouhatsu-Itsudatsu Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
Holy crap, did you write this about me? XD; Eerily awesome~

I agree with the whole 'its shortness is part of its beauty' thing. Nicely done.
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IloveHarryPotter1234 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This explains me when I'm truly inspired. This, this has truly inspired me. You are an amazing person, an amazing poet, and I've only read one of your poems! You just earned yourself a watch!
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:iconcrazyidealist:
CrazyIdealist Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014
I identify with this!
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:icondesiree407:
Desiree407 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I relate to this a lot! This is what inspired to me to start publishing my poetry on here. I was really happy when I saw my first piece had gotten eight views. :)
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:iconkiwiootori:
kiwiootori Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Student Writer
Same with me for the views, it's very exciting, isn't it? Oh, and I'm so happy I inspired you through my poem! OMG  
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Desiree407 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:) It's a great poem.
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